My dear sister Julie, stayed up all night to read and correct all the mistakes she found in my book, many were made when I transferred the ODT to PDF, I believe there is a glitch that doesn't show up until the template I used is transferred to PDF.
Thank you so much little sister, I have made the corrections. May God richly bless you for your unselfish ways.
Pg. 11, 61, 78 in two places, 106, 162 , 170, 188, > titles/books
Pg. 23, 49, & 166> K. L. Hiattity
Pg. 44 Kathy? What is a capos? "Kathy you make sure you steer clear of the two capos(nurses?) at the door and Rita." ???????
Pg. 62 Beatitude 4 needs the word, "comforted." also on Pg. 62 remove "and" after magazine.
Pg. 65 Need to revisit the sentence: "I never got found out, or tell...". (You told me!!!) Anyway doesn't seem right. Shouldn't it be: "I never was found out or told anyone what I had done, 'til now." or "I never was found out or told anyone what I had done, well, outside of close family, 'til now.". Then it isn't a lie.
Pg. 85 close the gap between whisper. "Maybe later..."
Pg. 89 The hyphen in obviously
Pg. 90 After the sentence where Ronna is licking her hands and drying them on her pants: need a "to" there between seem & hear.
Pg. 94 I was confused for moment. How could you fail third grade and then skip to sixth. Unless, instead of seventh you were placed in ... I am dumb! I need that explained.
Pg. 127 Iantha needs to be changed to Aretha. Need quotation marks at the end of the sentence ...cops on the lot of you."
Pg. 130 I do not recall this "Kathleen" ???
Pg. 139 Quotation marks Where Annie states it is important to trust you. ...me.". As I took ...
Pg. 154 Close the gap in the sentence I just couldn't understand ...
Pg. 156 Brother Kevin IS Brother Joseph...ooops!
Pg. 178 condemn
Pg. 201 Brother Joseph makes another appearance and sticks around to the next pages on 202.
Pg. 219 Close the gap bottom of page, With that, Dr. Smith...
Pg. 220 fix the sentence "Raising my daughter...either remove the "my" or change "her" to daughter. Very next sentence case change S to s for shared.
The back of the book, on the back cover, starts to repeat.
I know you had a hard time reliving the past. I do not see anything wrong with anything you wrote. I would have liked more detail and those funny (snide) comments. I also want to point out, though you say you are dumb, you really were quite brilliant! Going out one window and in another...skipping school. It amazes me how no one really knew what was going on. The nurses got away with abuse and you got away with all your rule breaking...well, most of it! I wonder if Skinner ever got hers... I pray it was with 7 fold!
Why isn't there a link to the site where we can buy your book?
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